This is such a good and interesting poem! I love it because it is just a bunch of nonsense but it makes so much sense. It reminds me of little kids when they get deliriously tired and start mumbling the weirdest and most random things. I still get that way when I get tired and everyone says it is super amusing.
This also reminds me of my dreams that I remember. I dont always remember them but the ones I do remember are wacky.
Before I even get into the time I dream, when I’m dozing off, I see letters or shapes and it is almost like they are in one of those computer screensavers. They move around on my inner eyelids and change in size. I know this sounds rediculously weird but its the the truth. I love to dream and to tell me friends about my dreams. They love hearing them, too. They mostly laugh but I don’t mind.
I love the color part, when he refers to the night-gowns. I can totally imagine seeing these things in my dreams. I think that our dreams come from everything and every thought we have all jumbled together. I have strange thoughts all the time that I think where did that come from, and when I have dreams I know those thoughts were the major influence on the dream. I also love the last line that says “In red weather.” I have no idea what that means but I think this must have been his dream and I can imagine him getting out of bed at three in the morning and writing it down before it slipped out of his memory.